[html5] r3397 - [e] (0) Audience tweaks, and typo fixes.

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Author: ianh
Date: 2009-07-13 18:01:28 -0700 (Mon, 13 Jul 2009)
New Revision: 3397

Modified:
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Audience tweaks, and typo fixes.

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2009-07-13 21:32:47 UTC (rev 3396)
+++ index	2009-07-14 01:01:28 UTC (rev 3397)
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
   <div class=head>
    <p><a class=logo href=http://www.whatwg.org/ rel=home><img alt=WHATWG src=/images/logo></a></p>
    <h1>HTML 5</h1>
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=draft-standard-—-date:-01-jan-1901>Draft Standard — 13 July 2009</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=draft-standard-—-date:-01-jan-1901>Draft Standard — 14 July 2009</h2>
    <p>You can take part in this work. <a href=http://www.whatwg.org/mailing-list>Join the working group's discussion list.</a></p>
    <p><strong>Web designers!</strong> We have a <a href=http://blog.whatwg.org/faq/>FAQ</a>, a <a href=http://forums.whatwg.org/>forum</a>, and a <a href=http://www.whatwg.org/mailing-list#help>help mailing list</a> for you!</p>
    <!--<p class="impl"><strong>Implementors!</strong> We have a <a href="http://www.whatwg.org/mailing-list#implementors">mailing list</a> for you too!</p>-->
@@ -1061,10 +1061,10 @@
   <p><i>This section is non-normative.</i></p>
 
   <p>This specification is intended for authors of documents and
-  scripts that use the features defined in this specification<span class=impl>, and implementors of tools that are intended to
-  conform to this specification, and individuals wishing to establish
-  the correctness of documents or implementations with respect to the
-  requirements of this specification</span>.</p>
+  scripts that use the features defined in this specification<span class=impl>, implementors of tools that operate on pages that use
+  the features defined in this specification, and individuals wishing
+  to establish the correctness of documents or implementations with
+  respect to the requirements of this specification</span>.</p>
 
   <p>This document is probably not suited to readers who do not
   already have at least a passing familiarity with Web technologies,
@@ -1072,11 +1072,11 @@
   completeness. More approachable tutorials and authoring guides can
   provide a gentler introduction to the topic.</p>
 
-  <p>In particular, readers should be familiar with the basics of DOM
-  Core and DOM Events before reading this specification. An
-  understanding of Web IDL, HTTP, XML, Unicode, character encodings,
-  JavaScript, and CSS will be helpful in places but is not
-  essential.</p>
+  <p>In particular, familiarity with the basics of DOM Core and DOM
+  Events is necessary for a complete understanding of some of the more
+  technical parts of this specification. An understanding of Web IDL,
+  HTTP, XML, Unicode, character encodings, JavaScript, and CSS will
+  also be helpful in places but is not essential.</p>
 
 
   <h3 id=scope><span class=secno>1.3 </span>Scope</h3>
@@ -48856,7 +48856,7 @@
      <td> The manifest was a 404 or 410 page, so the attempt to cache the application has been aborted.
      <td rowspan=3> Last event in sequence.
     <tr><td> The manifest hadn't changed, but the page referencing the manifest failed to download properly.
-    <tr><td> A fatal error occured while fetching the resources listed in the manifest.
+    <tr><td> A fatal error occurred while fetching the resources listed in the manifest.
     <tr><td> The manifest changed while the update was being run.
      <td> The user agent will try fetching the files again momentarily.
   </table><div class=impl>
@@ -71508,6 +71508,7 @@
   Darin Fisher,
   Dave Camp,
   Dave Hodder,
+  Dave Lampton,
   Dave Singer,
   Dave Townsend<!-- Mossop on moz irc -->,
   David Baron,

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2009-07-13 21:32:47 UTC (rev 3396)
+++ source	2009-07-14 01:01:28 UTC (rev 3397)
@@ -38,10 +38,10 @@
 
   <p>This specification is intended for authors of documents and
   scripts that use the features defined in this specification<span
-  class="impl">, and implementors of tools that are intended to
-  conform to this specification, and individuals wishing to establish
-  the correctness of documents or implementations with respect to the
-  requirements of this specification</span>.</p>
+  class="impl">, implementors of tools that operate on pages that use
+  the features defined in this specification, and individuals wishing
+  to establish the correctness of documents or implementations with
+  respect to the requirements of this specification</span>.</p>
 
   <p>This document is probably not suited to readers who do not
   already have at least a passing familiarity with Web technologies,
@@ -49,11 +49,11 @@
   completeness. More approachable tutorials and authoring guides can
   provide a gentler introduction to the topic.</p>
 
-  <p>In particular, readers should be familiar with the basics of DOM
-  Core and DOM Events before reading this specification. An
-  understanding of Web IDL, HTTP, XML, Unicode, character encodings,
-  JavaScript, and CSS will be helpful in places but is not
-  essential.</p>
+  <p>In particular, familiarity with the basics of DOM Core and DOM
+  Events is necessary for a complete understanding of some of the more
+  technical parts of this specification. An understanding of Web IDL,
+  HTTP, XML, Unicode, character encodings, JavaScript, and CSS will
+  also be helpful in places but is not essential.</p>
 
 
   <h3>Scope</h3>
@@ -55549,7 +55549,7 @@
     <tr>
      <td> The manifest hadn't changed, but the page referencing the manifest failed to download properly.
     <tr>
-     <td> A fatal error occured while fetching the resources listed in the manifest.
+     <td> A fatal error occurred while fetching the resources listed in the manifest.
     <tr>
      <td> The manifest changed while the update was being run.
      <td> The user agent will try fetching the files again momentarily.
@@ -84342,6 +84342,7 @@
   Darin Fisher,
   Dave Camp,
   Dave Hodder,
+  Dave Lampton,
   Dave Singer,
   Dave Townsend<!-- Mossop on moz irc -->,
   David Baron,