[html5] r4059 - [e] (0) Three unrelated editorial improvements.

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Author: ianh
Date: 2009-09-30 02:31:36 -0700 (Wed, 30 Sep 2009)
New Revision: 4059

Modified:
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Three unrelated editorial improvements.

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2009-09-30 08:01:01 UTC (rev 4058)
+++ index	2009-09-30 09:31:36 UTC (rev 4059)
@@ -49947,7 +49947,7 @@
    <li><p>The global object is the <code><a href=#window>Window</a></code> object of
    <var title="">document</var>.</li>
 
-   <li><p>The character encoding is the <a href="#document's-character-encoding" title="document's
+   <li><p>The URL character encoding is the <a href="#document's-character-encoding" title="document's
    character encoding">character encoding</a> of <var title="">document</var>. (<a href=#sce-not-copy>This is a
    reference, not a copy</a>.)</li>
 
@@ -52423,15 +52423,6 @@
     manifest itself, and then zero or more U+0020 SPACE and U+0009
     CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters.</p>
 
-    <p>When the current section is the <a href=#concept-appcache-manifest-network title=concept-appcache-manifest-network>online whitelist
-    section</a>, data lines must consist of zero or more U+0020
-    SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters, either a
-    single U+002A ASTERISK character (*) <!--
-    concept-appcache-onlinewhitelist-wildcard --> or a <a href=#valid-url>valid
-    URL</a> identifying a resource other than the manifest itself,
-    and then zero or more U+0020 SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION
-    (tab) characters.</p>
-
     <p>When the current section is the <a href=#concept-appcache-manifest-fallback title=concept-appcache-manifest-fallback>fallback
     section</a>, data lines must consist of zero or more U+0020
     SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters, a
@@ -52442,9 +52433,20 @@
     zero or more U+0020 SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab)
     characters.</p>
 
-    <p class=note>The URLs in data lines can't be empty strings,
+    <p>When the current section is the <a href=#concept-appcache-manifest-network title=concept-appcache-manifest-network>online whitelist
+    section</a>, data lines must consist of zero or more U+0020
+    SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters, either a
+    single U+002A ASTERISK character (*) <!--
+    concept-appcache-onlinewhitelist-wildcard --> or a <a href=#valid-url>valid
+    URL</a> identifying a resource other than the manifest itself,
+    and then zero or more U+0020 SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION
+    (tab) characters.</p>
+
+<!--
+    <p class="note">The URLs in data lines can't be empty strings,
     since those would be relative URLs to the manifest itself. Such
     lines would be confused with blank or invalid lines, anyway.</p>
+-->
 
   </dl><p>Manifests may contain sections more than once. Sections may be
   empty.</p>
@@ -74412,11 +74414,11 @@
   its <a href=#fallback-content>fallback content</a>, the element must be ignored (it
   represents nothing).</p>
 
-  <p>Otherwise, the user agent instantiate a Java Language runtime
-  <a href=#plugin>plugin</a>, if one available. Then, the user agent should
-  pass the names and values of all the attributes on the element, and
-  <!-- then a parameter named "PARAM" whose value is null, and then
-  --> all the names and values of <a href=#concept-param-parameter title=concept-param-parameter>parameters</a> given by
+  <p>Otherwise, the user agent should instantiate a Java Language
+  runtime <a href=#plugin>plugin</a>, if one available. Then, the user agent
+  should pass the names and values of all the attributes on the
+  element, and <!-- then a parameter named "PARAM" whose value is
+  null, and then --> all the names and values of <a href=#concept-param-parameter title=concept-param-parameter>parameters</a> given by
   <code><a href=#the-param-element>param</a></code> elements that are children of the
   <code><a href=#the-applet-element>applet</a></code> element, in <a href=#tree-order>tree order</a>, to the
   <a href=#plugin>plugin</a> used. If the <a href=#plugin>plugin</a> supports a

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2009-09-30 08:01:01 UTC (rev 4058)
+++ source	2009-09-30 09:31:36 UTC (rev 4059)
@@ -56396,7 +56396,7 @@
    <li><p>The global object is the <code>Window</code> object of
    <var title="">document</var>.</p></li>
 
-   <li><p>The character encoding is the <span title="document's
+   <li><p>The URL character encoding is the <span title="document's
    character encoding">character encoding</span> of <var
    title="">document</var>. (<a href="#sce-not-copy">This is a
    reference, not a copy</a>.)</p></li>
@@ -59247,16 +59247,6 @@
     CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters.</p>
 
     <p>When the current section is the <span
-    title="concept-appcache-manifest-network">online whitelist
-    section</span>, data lines must consist of zero or more U+0020
-    SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters, either a
-    single U+002A ASTERISK character (*) <!--
-    concept-appcache-onlinewhitelist-wildcard --> or a <span>valid
-    URL</span> identifying a resource other than the manifest itself,
-    and then zero or more U+0020 SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION
-    (tab) characters.</p>
-
-    <p>When the current section is the <span
     title="concept-appcache-manifest-fallback">fallback
     section</span>, data lines must consist of zero or more U+0020
     SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters, a
@@ -59267,9 +59257,21 @@
     zero or more U+0020 SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab)
     characters.</p>
 
+    <p>When the current section is the <span
+    title="concept-appcache-manifest-network">online whitelist
+    section</span>, data lines must consist of zero or more U+0020
+    SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION (tab) characters, either a
+    single U+002A ASTERISK character (*) <!--
+    concept-appcache-onlinewhitelist-wildcard --> or a <span>valid
+    URL</span> identifying a resource other than the manifest itself,
+    and then zero or more U+0020 SPACE and U+0009 CHARACTER TABULATION
+    (tab) characters.</p>
+
+<!--
     <p class="note">The URLs in data lines can't be empty strings,
     since those would be relative URLs to the manifest itself. Such
     lines would be confused with blank or invalid lines, anyway.</p>
+-->
 
   </dl>
 
@@ -88255,11 +88257,11 @@
   its <span>fallback content</span>, the element must be ignored (it
   represents nothing).</p>
 
-  <p>Otherwise, the user agent instantiate a Java Language runtime
-  <span>plugin</span>, if one available. Then, the user agent should
-  pass the names and values of all the attributes on the element, and
-  <!-- then a parameter named "PARAM" whose value is null, and then
-  --> all the names and values of <span
+  <p>Otherwise, the user agent should instantiate a Java Language
+  runtime <span>plugin</span>, if one available. Then, the user agent
+  should pass the names and values of all the attributes on the
+  element, and <!-- then a parameter named "PARAM" whose value is
+  null, and then --> all the names and values of <span
   title="concept-param-parameter">parameters</span> given by
   <code>param</code> elements that are children of the
   <code>applet</code> element, in <span>tree order</span>, to the