[html5] r1601 - /

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Author: ianh
Date: 2008-05-13 03:40:11 -0700 (Tue, 13 May 2008)
New Revision: 1601

Modified:
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) reword 'presentation concerns'

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2008-05-13 09:30:01 UTC (rev 1600)
+++ index	2008-05-13 10:40:11 UTC (rev 1601)
@@ -1847,9 +1847,11 @@
    accessible pages on the Web ranging from static documents to dynamic
    applications.
 
-  <p>The scope of this specification does not include addressing presentation
-   concerns (although default rendering rules for Web browsers are included
-   at the end of this specification).
+  <p>The scope of this specification does not include providing mechanisms
+   for media-specific customisation of presentation (although default
+   rendering rules for Web browsers are included at the end of this
+   specification, and several mechanisms for hooking into CSS are provided as
+   part of the language).
 
   <p>The scope of this specification does not include documenting every HTML
    or DOM feature supported by Web browsers. Browsers support many features

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2008-05-13 09:30:01 UTC (rev 1600)
+++ source	2008-05-13 10:40:11 UTC (rev 1601)
@@ -50,9 +50,11 @@
   authoring accessible pages on the Web ranging from static documents
   to dynamic applications.</p>
 
-  <p>The scope of this specification does not include addressing
-  presentation concerns (although default rendering rules for Web
-  browsers are included at the end of this specification).</p>
+  <p>The scope of this specification does not include providing
+  mechanisms for media-specific customisation of presentation
+  (although default rendering rules for Web browsers are included at
+  the end of this specification, and several mechanisms for hooking
+  into CSS are provided as part of the language).</p>
 
   <p>The scope of this specification does not include documenting
   every HTML or DOM feature supported by Web browsers. Browsers