[html5] r3158 - [e] (0) Tweak some informative wording for clarity. (bug 6768)

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Author: ianh
Date: 2009-06-01 02:27:23 -0700 (Mon, 01 Jun 2009)
New Revision: 3158

Modified:
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Tweak some informative wording for clarity. (bug 6768)

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2009-06-01 08:54:15 UTC (rev 3157)
+++ index	2009-06-01 09:27:23 UTC (rev 3158)
@@ -20624,9 +20624,10 @@
 
   </div>
 
-  <p class=note>To express the type of a <a href=#media-resource>media resource</a>
-  to allow the user agent to avoid downloading resources it can't
-  render, authors can use the <code><a href=#the-source-element>source</a></code> element's <code title=attr-source-type><a href=#attr-source-type>type</a></code> attribute.</p>
+  <p class=note>The <code title=attr-source-type><a href=#attr-source-type>type</a></code>
+  attribute of the <code><a href=#the-source-element>source</a></code> element allows the user agent
+  to avoid downloading resources that use formats it cannot
+  render.</p>
 
 
   <h5 id=network-states><span class=secno>4.8.10.4 </span>Network states</h5>

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2009-06-01 08:54:15 UTC (rev 3157)
+++ source	2009-06-01 09:27:23 UTC (rev 3158)
@@ -22195,10 +22195,10 @@
 
   </div>
 
-  <p class="note">To express the type of a <span>media resource</span>
-  to allow the user agent to avoid downloading resources it can't
-  render, authors can use the <code>source</code> element's <code
-  title="attr-source-type">type</code> attribute.</p>
+  <p class="note">The <code title="attr-source-type">type</code>
+  attribute of the <code>source</code> element allows the user agent
+  to avoid downloading resources that use formats it cannot
+  render.</p>
 
 
   <h5>Network states</h5>