[html5] r4490 - [e] (0) tweak the text to have the example stuff after 'for example'. Fixing htt [...]

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Author: ianh
Date: 2010-01-05 03:53:55 -0800 (Tue, 05 Jan 2010)
New Revision: 4490

Modified:
   complete.html
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) tweak the text to have the example stuff after 'for example'.
Fixing http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=8397

Modified: complete.html
===================================================================
--- complete.html	2010-01-05 11:50:25 UTC (rev 4489)
+++ complete.html	2010-01-05 11:53:55 UTC (rev 4490)
@@ -16394,9 +16394,9 @@
   offset. <a href=#refsGREGORIAN>[GREGORIAN]</a></p>
 
   <p>This element is intended as a way to encode modern dates and
-  times in a machine-readable way so that user agents can offer to add
-  them to the user's calendar. For example, adding birthday reminders
-  or scheduling events.</p>
+  times in a machine-readable way so that, for example, user agents
+  can offer to add birthday reminders or scheduled events to the
+  user's calendar.</p>
 
   <!-- it's also intended for restyling to local conventions
   (2000-12-31 vs 31-12-2000 vs 12-31-2000), but CSS doesn't support

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2010-01-05 11:50:25 UTC (rev 4489)
+++ index	2010-01-05 11:53:55 UTC (rev 4490)
@@ -16229,9 +16229,9 @@
   offset. <a href=#refsGREGORIAN>[GREGORIAN]</a></p>
 
   <p>This element is intended as a way to encode modern dates and
-  times in a machine-readable way so that user agents can offer to add
-  them to the user's calendar. For example, adding birthday reminders
-  or scheduling events.</p>
+  times in a machine-readable way so that, for example, user agents
+  can offer to add birthday reminders or scheduled events to the
+  user's calendar.</p>
 
   <!-- it's also intended for restyling to local conventions
   (2000-12-31 vs 31-12-2000 vs 12-31-2000), but CSS doesn't support

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2010-01-05 11:50:25 UTC (rev 4489)
+++ source	2010-01-05 11:53:55 UTC (rev 4490)
@@ -17289,9 +17289,9 @@
   offset. <a href="#refsGREGORIAN">[GREGORIAN]</a></p>
 
   <p>This element is intended as a way to encode modern dates and
-  times in a machine-readable way so that user agents can offer to add
-  them to the user's calendar. For example, adding birthday reminders
-  or scheduling events.</p>
+  times in a machine-readable way so that, for example, user agents
+  can offer to add birthday reminders or scheduled events to the
+  user's calendar.</p>
 
   <!-- it's also intended for restyling to local conventions
   (2000-12-31 vs 31-12-2000 vs 12-31-2000), but CSS doesn't support