[html5] r4732 - [e] (0) Try to clarify this sentence. Fixing http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_ [...]

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Author: ianh
Date: 2010-02-14 02:54:23 -0800 (Sun, 14 Feb 2010)
New Revision: 4732

Modified:
   complete.html
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Try to clarify this sentence.
Fixing http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=8902

Modified: complete.html
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--- complete.html	2010-02-14 10:47:17 UTC (rev 4731)
+++ complete.html	2010-02-14 10:54:23 UTC (rev 4732)
@@ -2025,9 +2025,9 @@
   as referring to the document's root element, means the furthest
   ancestor element node of whatever node is being discussed, or the
   node itself if it has no ancestors. When the node is a part of the
-  document, then that is indeed the document's root element; however,
-  if the node is not currently part of the document tree, the root
-  element will be an orphaned node.</p>
+  document, then the node's <a href=#root-element>root element</a> is indeed the
+  document's root element; however, if the node is not currently part
+  of the document tree, the root element will be an orphaned node.</p>
 
   <p>A node's <dfn id=home-subtree>home subtree</dfn> is the subtree rooted at that
   node's <a href=#root-element>root element</a>.</p>

Modified: index
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--- index	2010-02-14 10:47:17 UTC (rev 4731)
+++ index	2010-02-14 10:54:23 UTC (rev 4732)
@@ -1924,9 +1924,9 @@
   as referring to the document's root element, means the furthest
   ancestor element node of whatever node is being discussed, or the
   node itself if it has no ancestors. When the node is a part of the
-  document, then that is indeed the document's root element; however,
-  if the node is not currently part of the document tree, the root
-  element will be an orphaned node.</p>
+  document, then the node's <a href=#root-element>root element</a> is indeed the
+  document's root element; however, if the node is not currently part
+  of the document tree, the root element will be an orphaned node.</p>
 
   <p>A node's <dfn id=home-subtree>home subtree</dfn> is the subtree rooted at that
   node's <a href=#root-element>root element</a>.</p>

Modified: source
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--- source	2010-02-14 10:47:17 UTC (rev 4731)
+++ source	2010-02-14 10:54:23 UTC (rev 4732)
@@ -892,9 +892,9 @@
   as referring to the document's root element, means the furthest
   ancestor element node of whatever node is being discussed, or the
   node itself if it has no ancestors. When the node is a part of the
-  document, then that is indeed the document's root element; however,
-  if the node is not currently part of the document tree, the root
-  element will be an orphaned node.</p>
+  document, then the node's <span>root element</span> is indeed the
+  document's root element; however, if the node is not currently part
+  of the document tree, the root element will be an orphaned node.</p>
 
   <p>A node's <dfn>home subtree</dfn> is the subtree rooted at that
   node's <span>root element</span>.</p>