[html5] r4776 - [e] (0) readability Fixing http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=8934

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Author: ianh
Date: 2010-02-17 19:30:03 -0800 (Wed, 17 Feb 2010)
New Revision: 4776

Modified:
   complete.html
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) readability
Fixing http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=8934

Modified: complete.html
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--- complete.html	2010-02-18 03:27:55 UTC (rev 4775)
+++ complete.html	2010-02-18 03:30:03 UTC (rev 4776)
@@ -8704,10 +8704,10 @@
   contexts.</p>
 
   <div class=example>
-   <p>The Atom specification defines the Atom <code title="">content</code> element, when its <code title="">type</code> attribute has the value <code title="">xhtml</code>, as requiring that it contains a single HTML
-   <code><a href=#the-div-element>div</a></code> element. Thus, a <code><a href=#the-div-element>div</a></code> element is
-   allowed in that context, even though this is not explicitly
-   normatively stated by this specification. <a href=#refsATOM>[ATOM]</a></p>
+   <p>For example, the Atom specification defines a <code title="">content</code> element. When its <code title="">type</code> attribute has the value <code title="">xhtml</code>, the Atom specification requires that it
+   contain a single HTML <code><a href=#the-div-element>div</a></code> element. Thus, a
+   <code><a href=#the-div-element>div</a></code> element is allowed in that context, even though
+   this is not explicitly normatively stated by this specification. <a href=#refsATOM>[ATOM]</a></p>
   </div>
 
   <p>In addition, <a href=#html-elements>HTML elements</a> may be orphan nodes

Modified: index
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--- index	2010-02-18 03:27:55 UTC (rev 4775)
+++ index	2010-02-18 03:30:03 UTC (rev 4776)
@@ -8603,10 +8603,10 @@
   contexts.</p>
 
   <div class=example>
-   <p>The Atom specification defines the Atom <code title="">content</code> element, when its <code title="">type</code> attribute has the value <code title="">xhtml</code>, as requiring that it contains a single HTML
-   <code><a href=#the-div-element>div</a></code> element. Thus, a <code><a href=#the-div-element>div</a></code> element is
-   allowed in that context, even though this is not explicitly
-   normatively stated by this specification. <a href=#refsATOM>[ATOM]</a></p>
+   <p>For example, the Atom specification defines a <code title="">content</code> element. When its <code title="">type</code> attribute has the value <code title="">xhtml</code>, the Atom specification requires that it
+   contain a single HTML <code><a href=#the-div-element>div</a></code> element. Thus, a
+   <code><a href=#the-div-element>div</a></code> element is allowed in that context, even though
+   this is not explicitly normatively stated by this specification. <a href=#refsATOM>[ATOM]</a></p>
   </div>
 
   <p>In addition, <a href=#html-elements>HTML elements</a> may be orphan nodes

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2010-02-18 03:27:55 UTC (rev 4775)
+++ source	2010-02-18 03:30:03 UTC (rev 4776)
@@ -8742,13 +8742,13 @@
   contexts.</p>
 
   <div class="example">
-   <p>The Atom specification defines the Atom <code
-   title="">content</code> element, when its <code
+   <p>For example, the Atom specification defines a <code
+   title="">content</code> element. When its <code
    title="">type</code> attribute has the value <code
-   title="">xhtml</code>, as requiring that it contains a single HTML
-   <code>div</code> element. Thus, a <code>div</code> element is
-   allowed in that context, even though this is not explicitly
-   normatively stated by this specification. <a
+   title="">xhtml</code>, the Atom specification requires that it
+   contain a single HTML <code>div</code> element. Thus, a
+   <code>div</code> element is allowed in that context, even though
+   this is not explicitly normatively stated by this specification. <a
    href="#refsATOM">[ATOM]</a></p>
   </div>