[html5] r3610 - [e] (0) Try to help the cadence of the introduction.

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Author: ianh
Date: 2009-08-13 21:04:16 -0700 (Thu, 13 Aug 2009)
New Revision: 3610

Modified:
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Try to help the cadence of the introduction.

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2009-08-14 03:13:34 UTC (rev 3609)
+++ index	2009-08-14 04:04:16 UTC (rev 3610)
@@ -1272,11 +1272,11 @@
   <p>The second concrete syntax uses XML, and is known as
   "XHTML5". When a document is transmitted with an <a href=#xml-mime-type>XML MIME
   type</a>, such as <code><a href=#application/xhtml+xml>application/xhtml+xml</a></code>, then it is
-  processed by an XML processor by Web browsers, and treated as an
-  "XHTML5" document. Authors are reminded that the processing for XML
-  and HTML differs; in particular, even minor syntax errors will
-  prevent an XML document from being rendered fully, whereas they
-  would be ignored in the "HTML5" syntax.</p>
+  treated as an "XHTML5" document by Web browsers, which means that it
+  will be handled by an XML processor. Authors are reminded that the
+  processing for XML and HTML differs; in particular, even minor
+  syntax errors will prevent an XML document from being rendered
+  fully, whereas they would be ignored in the "HTML5" syntax.</p>
 
   <p>The "DOM5 HTML", "HTML5", and "XHTML5" representations cannot all
   represent the same content. For example, namespaces cannot be

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2009-08-14 03:13:34 UTC (rev 3609)
+++ source	2009-08-14 04:04:16 UTC (rev 3610)
@@ -258,11 +258,11 @@
   <p>The second concrete syntax uses XML, and is known as
   "XHTML5". When a document is transmitted with an <span>XML MIME
   type</span>, such as <code>application/xhtml+xml</code>, then it is
-  processed by an XML processor by Web browsers, and treated as an
-  "XHTML5" document. Authors are reminded that the processing for XML
-  and HTML differs; in particular, even minor syntax errors will
-  prevent an XML document from being rendered fully, whereas they
-  would be ignored in the "HTML5" syntax.</p>
+  treated as an "XHTML5" document by Web browsers, which means that it
+  will be handled by an XML processor. Authors are reminded that the
+  processing for XML and HTML differs; in particular, even minor
+  syntax errors will prevent an XML document from being rendered
+  fully, whereas they would be ignored in the "HTML5" syntax.</p>
 
   <p>The "DOM5 HTML", "HTML5", and "XHTML5" representations cannot all
   represent the same content. For example, namespaces cannot be