[html5] r3988 - [e] (0) More clarifications, editorial fixes, example fixes, etc.

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Thu Sep 24 03:31:34 PDT 2009


Author: ianh
Date: 2009-09-24 03:31:33 -0700 (Thu, 24 Sep 2009)
New Revision: 3988

Modified:
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) More clarifications, editorial fixes, example fixes, etc.

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2009-09-24 10:19:39 UTC (rev 3987)
+++ index	2009-09-24 10:31:33 UTC (rev 3988)
@@ -13256,8 +13256,7 @@
 work. But I'm paid to do my hobby, so I never know what to
 answer. Some people wonder what they would do if they didn't have to
 work... but I know what I would do, because I was unemployed for a
-year, and I filled that time doing exactly what I do
-now.</q></p>
+year, and I filled that time doing exactly what I do now.</q></p>
 
 <aside>
  <q> People ask me what I do for fun when I'm not at work. But I'm
@@ -13562,8 +13561,8 @@
   <h1>Little Green Guys With Guns</h1>
   <nav>
    <ul>
-    <li><a href="/games">Games</a> |
-    <li><a href="/forum">Forum</a> |
+    <li><a href="/games">Games</a>
+    <li><a href="/forum">Forum</a>
     <li><a href="/download">Download</a>
    </ul>
   </nav>
@@ -13601,12 +13600,12 @@
   information about its section such as who wrote it, links to related
   documents, copyright data, and the like.</p>
 
-  <p class=note>Contact information belongs in an
-  <code><a href=#the-address-element>address</a></code> element, possibly itself inside a
-  <code><a href=#the-footer-element>footer</a></code>.</p>
+  <p class=note>Contact information for the author or editor of a
+  section belongs in an <code><a href=#the-address-element>address</a></code> element, possibly itself
+  inside a <code><a href=#the-footer-element>footer</a></code>.</p>
 
-  <p>Footers don't necessarily have to appear at the <em>end</em> of a section,
-  though they usually do.</p>
+  <p>Footers don't necessarily have to appear at the <em>end</em> of a
+  section, though they usually do.</p>
 
   <p>When the <code><a href=#the-footer-element>footer</a></code> element contains entire sections,
   they <a href=#represents title=represents>represent</a> appendices, indexes,
@@ -15704,9 +15703,10 @@
   </dl><p>The <code><a href=#the-q-element>q</a></code> element <a href=#represents>represents</a> some <a href=#phrasing-content title="phrasing content">phrasing content</a> quoted from another
   source.</p>
 
-  <p>Quotation punctuation (such as quotation marks) must not appear
-  immediately before, after, or inside <code><a href=#the-q-element>q</a></code> elements; they
-  will be inserted into the rendering by the user agent.</p>
+  <p>Quotation punctuation (such as quotation marks) that is quoting
+  the contents of the element must not appear immediately before,
+  after, or inside <code><a href=#the-q-element>q</a></code> elements; they will be inserted into
+  the rendering by the user agent.</p>
 
   <p>Content inside a <code><a href=#the-q-element>q</a></code> element must be quoted from
   another source, whose address, if it has one, should be cited in the
@@ -15714,17 +15714,13 @@
   source may be fictional, as when quoting characters in a novel or
   screenplay.</p>
 
-  <div class=impl>
-
   <p>If the <code title=attr-q-cite><a href=#attr-q-cite>cite</a></code> attribute is
-  present, it must be a <a href=#valid-url>valid URL</a>. To obtain the
-  corresponding citation link, the value of the attribute must be
-  <a href=#resolve-a-url title="resolve a url">resolved</a> relative to the
+  present, it must be a <a href=#valid-url>valid URL</a>. <span class=impl>To
+  obtain the corresponding citation link, the value of the attribute
+  must be <a href=#resolve-a-url title="resolve a url">resolved</a> relative to the
   element. User agents should allow users to follow such citation
-  links.</p>
+  links.</span></p>
 
-  </div>
-
   <p>The <code><a href=#the-q-element>q</a></code> element must not be used in place of quotation
   marks that do not represent quotes; for example, it is inappropriate
   to use the <code><a href=#the-q-element>q</a></code> element for marking up sarcastic

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2009-09-24 10:19:39 UTC (rev 3987)
+++ source	2009-09-24 10:31:33 UTC (rev 3988)
@@ -14084,8 +14084,7 @@
 work. But I'm paid to do my hobby, so I never know what to
 answer. Some people wonder what they would do if they didn't have to
 work... but I know what I would do, because I was unemployed for a
-year, and I filled that time doing exactly what I do
-now.</q></p>
+year, and I filled that time doing exactly what I do now.</q></p>
 
 <aside>
  <q> People ask me what I do for fun when I'm not at work. But I'm
@@ -14399,8 +14398,8 @@
   <h1>Little Green Guys With Guns</h1>
   <nav>
    <ul>
-    <li><a href="/games">Games</a> |
-    <li><a href="/forum">Forum</a> |
+    <li><a href="/games">Games</a>
+    <li><a href="/forum">Forum</a>
     <li><a href="/download">Download</a>
    </ul>
   </nav>
@@ -14441,12 +14440,12 @@
   information about its section such as who wrote it, links to related
   documents, copyright data, and the like.</p>
 
-  <p class="note">Contact information belongs in an
-  <code>address</code> element, possibly itself inside a
-  <code>footer</code>.</p>
+  <p class="note">Contact information for the author or editor of a
+  section belongs in an <code>address</code> element, possibly itself
+  inside a <code>footer</code>.</p>
 
-  <p>Footers don't necessarily have to appear at the <em>end</em> of a section,
-  though they usually do.</p>
+  <p>Footers don't necessarily have to appear at the <em>end</em> of a
+  section, though they usually do.</p>
 
   <p>When the <code>footer</code> element contains entire sections,
   they <span title="represents">represent</span> appendices, indexes,
@@ -16739,9 +16738,10 @@
   title="phrasing content">phrasing content</span> quoted from another
   source.</p>
 
-  <p>Quotation punctuation (such as quotation marks) must not appear
-  immediately before, after, or inside <code>q</code> elements; they
-  will be inserted into the rendering by the user agent.</p>
+  <p>Quotation punctuation (such as quotation marks) that is quoting
+  the contents of the element must not appear immediately before,
+  after, or inside <code>q</code> elements; they will be inserted into
+  the rendering by the user agent.</p>
 
   <p>Content inside a <code>q</code> element must be quoted from
   another source, whose address, if it has one, should be cited in the
@@ -16749,17 +16749,13 @@
   source may be fictional, as when quoting characters in a novel or
   screenplay.</p>
 
-  <div class="impl">
-
   <p>If the <code title="attr-q-cite">cite</code> attribute is
-  present, it must be a <span>valid URL</span>. To obtain the
-  corresponding citation link, the value of the attribute must be
-  <span title="resolve a url">resolved</span> relative to the
+  present, it must be a <span>valid URL</span>. <span class="impl">To
+  obtain the corresponding citation link, the value of the attribute
+  must be <span title="resolve a url">resolved</span> relative to the
   element. User agents should allow users to follow such citation
-  links.</p>
+  links.</span></p>
 
-  </div>
-
   <p>The <code>q</code> element must not be used in place of quotation
   marks that do not represent quotes; for example, it is inappropriate
   to use the <code>q</code> element for marking up sarcastic




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