[html5] r4627 - [e] (0) some editorial improvements to 'the indicated part...'

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Tue Jan 26 17:49:15 PST 2010


Author: ianh
Date: 2010-01-26 17:49:13 -0800 (Tue, 26 Jan 2010)
New Revision: 4627

Modified:
   complete.html
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) some editorial improvements to 'the indicated part...'

Modified: complete.html
===================================================================
--- complete.html	2010-01-24 11:34:30 UTC (rev 4626)
+++ complete.html	2010-01-27 01:49:13 UTC (rev 4627)
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@
 
   <header class=head id=head><p><a class=logo href=http://www.whatwg.org/ rel=home><img alt=WHATWG src=/images/logo></a></p>
    <hgroup><h1>Web Applications 1.0</h1>
-    <h2 class="no-num no-toc">Draft Standard — 24 January 2010</h2>
+    <h2 class="no-num no-toc">Draft Standard — 27 January 2010</h2>
    </hgroup><p>You can take part in this work. <a href=http://www.whatwg.org/mailing-list>Join the working group's discussion list.</a></p>
    <p><strong>Web designers!</strong> We have a <a href=http://blog.whatwg.org/faq/>FAQ</a>, a <a href=http://forums.whatwg.org/>forum</a>, and a <a href=http://www.whatwg.org/mailing-list#help>help mailing list</a> for you!</p>
    <!--<p class="impl"><strong>Implementors!</strong> We have a <a href="http://www.whatwg.org/mailing-list#implementors">mailing list</a> for you too!</p>-->
@@ -57211,7 +57211,7 @@
   defined by the specification that defines the <a href=#mime-type>MIME type</a>
   used by the <code>Document</code> (for example, the processing of
   fragment identifiers for <a href=#xml-mime-type title="XML MIME type">XML MIME
-  types</a> is the responsibility of RFC3023).</p>
+  types</a> is the responsibility of RFC3023). <a href=#refsRFC3023>[RFC3023]</a></p>
 
   <p>For HTML documents (and <a href=#html-mime-type title="HTML MIME type">HTML MIME
   types</a>), the following processing model must be followed to
@@ -57223,8 +57223,9 @@
    URL.</li><!-- parsing can't fail, since we checked earlier on
    when navigating -->
 
-   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then the
-   indicated part of the document is the top of the document.</li>
+   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then
+   <a href=#the-indicated-part-of-the-document>the indicated part of the document</a> is the top of the
+   document.</li>
 
    <li><p>Let <var title="">decoded fragid</var> be the result of
    expanding any sequences of percent-encoded octets in <var title="">fragid</var> that are valid UTF-8 sequences into Unicode
@@ -57244,8 +57245,8 @@
    order is <a href=#the-indicated-part-of-the-document>the indicated part of the document</a>; stop the
    algorithm here.</li>
 
-   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no indicated part of the
-   document.</li>
+   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no <a href=#the-indicated-part-of-the-document title="the indicated part of
+   the document">indicated part of the document</a>.</li>
 
   </ol><p>For the purposes of the interaction of HTML with Selectors' <code title=selector-target>:target</code> pseudo-class, the
   <dfn id=target-element><i>target element</i></dfn> is <a href=#the-indicated-part-of-the-document>the indicated part of the

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2010-01-24 11:34:30 UTC (rev 4626)
+++ index	2010-01-27 01:49:13 UTC (rev 4627)
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
 
   <header class=head id=head><p><a class=logo href=http://www.whatwg.org/ rel=home><img alt=WHATWG src=/images/logo></a></p>
    <hgroup><h1>HTML5 (including next generation additions still in development)</h1>
-    <h2 class="no-num no-toc">Draft Standard — 24 January 2010</h2>
+    <h2 class="no-num no-toc">Draft Standard — 27 January 2010</h2>
    </hgroup><p>You can take part in this work. <a href=http://www.whatwg.org/mailing-list>Join the working group's discussion list.</a></p>
    <p><strong>Web designers!</strong> We have a <a href=http://blog.whatwg.org/faq/>FAQ</a>, a <a href=http://forums.whatwg.org/>forum</a>, and a <a href=http://www.whatwg.org/mailing-list#help>help mailing list</a> for you!</p>
    <!--<p class="impl"><strong>Implementors!</strong> We have a <a href="http://www.whatwg.org/mailing-list#implementors">mailing list</a> for you too!</p>-->
@@ -57125,7 +57125,7 @@
   defined by the specification that defines the <a href=#mime-type>MIME type</a>
   used by the <code>Document</code> (for example, the processing of
   fragment identifiers for <a href=#xml-mime-type title="XML MIME type">XML MIME
-  types</a> is the responsibility of RFC3023).</p>
+  types</a> is the responsibility of RFC3023). <a href=#refsRFC3023>[RFC3023]</a></p>
 
   <p>For HTML documents (and <a href=#html-mime-type title="HTML MIME type">HTML MIME
   types</a>), the following processing model must be followed to
@@ -57137,8 +57137,9 @@
    URL.</li><!-- parsing can't fail, since we checked earlier on
    when navigating -->
 
-   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then the
-   indicated part of the document is the top of the document.</li>
+   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then
+   <a href=#the-indicated-part-of-the-document>the indicated part of the document</a> is the top of the
+   document.</li>
 
    <li><p>Let <var title="">decoded fragid</var> be the result of
    expanding any sequences of percent-encoded octets in <var title="">fragid</var> that are valid UTF-8 sequences into Unicode
@@ -57158,8 +57159,8 @@
    order is <a href=#the-indicated-part-of-the-document>the indicated part of the document</a>; stop the
    algorithm here.</li>
 
-   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no indicated part of the
-   document.</li>
+   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no <a href=#the-indicated-part-of-the-document title="the indicated part of
+   the document">indicated part of the document</a>.</li>
 
   </ol><p>For the purposes of the interaction of HTML with Selectors' <code title=selector-target>:target</code> pseudo-class, the
   <dfn id=target-element><i>target element</i></dfn> is <a href=#the-indicated-part-of-the-document>the indicated part of the

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2010-01-24 11:34:30 UTC (rev 4626)
+++ source	2010-01-27 01:49:13 UTC (rev 4627)
@@ -64669,7 +64669,8 @@
   defined by the specification that defines the <span>MIME type</span>
   used by the <code>Document</code> (for example, the processing of
   fragment identifiers for <span title="XML MIME type">XML MIME
-  types</span> is the responsibility of RFC3023).</p>
+  types</span> is the responsibility of RFC3023). <a
+  href="#refsRFC3023">[RFC3023]</a></p>
 
   <p>For HTML documents (and <span title="HTML MIME type">HTML MIME
   types</span>), the following processing model must be followed to
@@ -64684,8 +64685,9 @@
    URL.</p></li><!-- parsing can't fail, since we checked earlier on
    when navigating -->
 
-   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then the
-   indicated part of the document is the top of the document.</p></li>
+   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then
+   <span>the indicated part of the document</span> is the top of the
+   document.</p></li>
 
    <li><p>Let <var title="">decoded fragid</var> be the result of
    expanding any sequences of percent-encoded octets in <var
@@ -64707,8 +64709,8 @@
    order is <span>the indicated part of the document</span>; stop the
    algorithm here.</p></li>
 
-   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no indicated part of the
-   document.</p></li>
+   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no <span title="the indicated part of
+   the document">indicated part of the document</span>.</p></li>
 
   </ol>
 




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