[html5] r5031 - [e] (0) fine tune <section> and <article> descriptions some more. Fixing http:// [...]

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Author: ianh
Date: 2010-04-13 01:50:05 -0700 (Tue, 13 Apr 2010)
New Revision: 5031

Modified:
   complete.html
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) fine tune <section> and <article> descriptions some more.
Fixing http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=9491

Modified: complete.html
===================================================================
--- complete.html	2010-04-13 08:46:36 UTC (rev 5030)
+++ complete.html	2010-04-13 08:50:05 UTC (rev 5031)
@@ -14663,8 +14663,9 @@
    <dt>DOM interface:</dt>
    <dd>Uses <code><a href=#htmlelement>HTMLElement</a></code>.</dd>
   </dl><p>The <code><a href=#the-section-element>section</a></code> element <a href=#represents>represents</a> a
-  generic document or application section. A section, in this context,
-  is a thematic grouping of content, typically with a heading.</p>
+  generic section of a document or application. A section, in this
+  context, is a thematic grouping of content, typically with a
+  heading.</p>
 
   <p class=example>Examples of sections would be chapters, the
   various tabbed pages in a tabbed dialog box, or the numbered
@@ -14918,12 +14919,12 @@
    <dt>DOM interface:</dt>
    <dd>Uses <code><a href=#htmlelement>HTMLElement</a></code>.</dd>
   </dl><p>The <code><a href=#the-article-element>article</a></code> element <a href=#represents>represents</a> a
-  component of a page that consists of a self-contained composition in
-  a document, page, application, or site and that is intended to be
-  independently distributable or reusable, e.g. in syndication. This
-  could be a forum post, a magazine or newspaper article, a blog
-  entry, a user-submitted comment, an interactive widget or gadget, or
-  any other independent item of content.</p>
+  self-contained composition in a document, page, application, or site
+  and that is intended to be independently distributable or reusable,
+  e.g. in syndication. This could be a forum post, a magazine or
+  newspaper article, a blog entry, a user-submitted comment, an
+  interactive widget or gadget, or any other independent item of
+  content.</p>
 
   <p>When <code><a href=#the-article-element>article</a></code> elements are nested, the inner
   <code><a href=#the-article-element>article</a></code> elements represent articles that are in

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2010-04-13 08:46:36 UTC (rev 5030)
+++ index	2010-04-13 08:50:05 UTC (rev 5031)
@@ -14561,8 +14561,9 @@
    <dt>DOM interface:</dt>
    <dd>Uses <code><a href=#htmlelement>HTMLElement</a></code>.</dd>
   </dl><p>The <code><a href=#the-section-element>section</a></code> element <a href=#represents>represents</a> a
-  generic document or application section. A section, in this context,
-  is a thematic grouping of content, typically with a heading.</p>
+  generic section of a document or application. A section, in this
+  context, is a thematic grouping of content, typically with a
+  heading.</p>
 
   <p class=example>Examples of sections would be chapters, the
   various tabbed pages in a tabbed dialog box, or the numbered
@@ -14816,12 +14817,12 @@
    <dt>DOM interface:</dt>
    <dd>Uses <code><a href=#htmlelement>HTMLElement</a></code>.</dd>
   </dl><p>The <code><a href=#the-article-element>article</a></code> element <a href=#represents>represents</a> a
-  component of a page that consists of a self-contained composition in
-  a document, page, application, or site and that is intended to be
-  independently distributable or reusable, e.g. in syndication. This
-  could be a forum post, a magazine or newspaper article, a blog
-  entry, a user-submitted comment, an interactive widget or gadget, or
-  any other independent item of content.</p>
+  self-contained composition in a document, page, application, or site
+  and that is intended to be independently distributable or reusable,
+  e.g. in syndication. This could be a forum post, a magazine or
+  newspaper article, a blog entry, a user-submitted comment, an
+  interactive widget or gadget, or any other independent item of
+  content.</p>
 
   <p>When <code><a href=#the-article-element>article</a></code> elements are nested, the inner
   <code><a href=#the-article-element>article</a></code> elements represent articles that are in

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2010-04-13 08:46:36 UTC (rev 5030)
+++ source	2010-04-13 08:50:05 UTC (rev 5031)
@@ -15471,8 +15471,9 @@
   </dl>
 
   <p>The <code>section</code> element <span>represents</span> a
-  generic document or application section. A section, in this context,
-  is a thematic grouping of content, typically with a heading.</p>
+  generic section of a document or application. A section, in this
+  context, is a thematic grouping of content, typically with a
+  heading.</p>
 
   <p class="example">Examples of sections would be chapters, the
   various tabbed pages in a tabbed dialog box, or the numbered
@@ -15732,12 +15733,12 @@
   </dl>
 
   <p>The <code>article</code> element <span>represents</span> a
-  component of a page that consists of a self-contained composition in
-  a document, page, application, or site and that is intended to be
-  independently distributable or reusable, e.g. in syndication. This
-  could be a forum post, a magazine or newspaper article, a blog
-  entry, a user-submitted comment, an interactive widget or gadget, or
-  any other independent item of content.</p>
+  self-contained composition in a document, page, application, or site
+  and that is intended to be independently distributable or reusable,
+  e.g. in syndication. This could be a forum post, a magazine or
+  newspaper article, a blog entry, a user-submitted comment, an
+  interactive widget or gadget, or any other independent item of
+  content.</p>
 
   <p>When <code>article</code> elements are nested, the inner
   <code>article</code> elements represent articles that are in