[html5] r5290 - [e] (0) editorial tweak

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Author: ianh
Date: 2010-08-13 14:02:15 -0700 (Fri, 13 Aug 2010)
New Revision: 5290

Modified:
   complete.html
   source
Log:
[e] (0) editorial tweak

Modified: complete.html
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--- complete.html	2010-08-13 20:58:07 UTC (rev 5289)
+++ complete.html	2010-08-13 21:02:15 UTC (rev 5290)
@@ -73155,10 +73155,10 @@
   page to a remote server.
   </p>
 
-  <p>The same technique can be used for a variety of Web applications:
-  games, stock tickers, multiuser applications with simultaneous
-  editing, user interfaces exposing server-side services in real time,
-  etc.</p>
+  <p>The same technique can be used for a variety of Web applications,
+  for instance games, stock tickers, multiuser applications with
+  simultaneous editing, and user interfaces exposing server-side
+  services in real time.</p>
 
 
 

Modified: source
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--- source	2010-08-13 20:58:07 UTC (rev 5289)
+++ source	2010-08-13 21:02:15 UTC (rev 5290)
@@ -82344,10 +82344,10 @@
   <!--START complete--><!--START epub-->
   </p>
 
-  <p>The same technique can be used for a variety of Web applications:
-  games, stock tickers, multiuser applications with simultaneous
-  editing, user interfaces exposing server-side services in real time,
-  etc.</p>
+  <p>The same technique can be used for a variety of Web applications,
+  for instance games, stock tickers, multiuser applications with
+  simultaneous editing, and user interfaces exposing server-side
+  services in real time.</p>