[html5] r6459 - [e] (0) improved precision in wording Fixing http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_ [...]

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Author: ianh
Date: 2011-08-14 22:43:26 -0700 (Sun, 14 Aug 2011)
New Revision: 6459

Modified:
   complete.html
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) improved precision in wording
Fixing http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=13440

Modified: complete.html
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--- complete.html	2011-08-15 05:39:01 UTC (rev 6458)
+++ complete.html	2011-08-15 05:43:26 UTC (rev 6459)
@@ -26460,8 +26460,8 @@
     <tr><td><dfn id=attr-track-kind-keyword-descriptions title=attr-track-kind-keyword-descriptions><code>descriptions</code></dfn>
      <td><dfn id=attr-track-kind-descriptions title=attr-track-kind-descriptions>Descriptions</dfn>
      <td>
-      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href=#media-resource>media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is unavailable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
-      Synthesized as separate audio track.
+      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href=#media-resource>media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is obscured, unavailable, or not usable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
+      Synthesized as audio.
     <tr><td><dfn id=attr-track-kind-keyword-chapters title=attr-track-kind-keyword-chapters><code>chapters</code></dfn>
      <td><dfn id=attr-track-kind-chapters title=attr-track-kind-chapters>Chapters</dfn>
      <td>

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2011-08-15 05:39:01 UTC (rev 6458)
+++ index	2011-08-15 05:43:26 UTC (rev 6459)
@@ -26327,8 +26327,8 @@
     <tr><td><dfn id=attr-track-kind-keyword-descriptions title=attr-track-kind-keyword-descriptions><code>descriptions</code></dfn>
      <td><dfn id=attr-track-kind-descriptions title=attr-track-kind-descriptions>Descriptions</dfn>
      <td>
-      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href=#media-resource>media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is unavailable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
-      Synthesized as separate audio track.
+      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href=#media-resource>media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is obscured, unavailable, or not usable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
+      Synthesized as audio.
     <tr><td><dfn id=attr-track-kind-keyword-chapters title=attr-track-kind-keyword-chapters><code>chapters</code></dfn>
      <td><dfn id=attr-track-kind-chapters title=attr-track-kind-chapters>Chapters</dfn>
      <td>

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2011-08-15 05:39:01 UTC (rev 6458)
+++ source	2011-08-15 05:43:26 UTC (rev 6459)
@@ -28477,8 +28477,8 @@
      <td><dfn title="attr-track-kind-keyword-descriptions"><code>descriptions</code></dfn>
      <td><dfn title="attr-track-kind-descriptions">Descriptions</dfn>
      <td>
-      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <span>media resource</span>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is unavailable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
-      Synthesized as separate audio track.
+      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <span>media resource</span>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is obscured, unavailable, or not usable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
+      Synthesized as audio.
     <tr>
      <td><dfn title="attr-track-kind-keyword-chapters"><code>chapters</code></dfn>
      <td><dfn title="attr-track-kind-chapters">Chapters</dfn>