[html5] r6927 - [e] (0) Clarify example text. Fixing https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi [...]

Sat Jan 28 10:20:22 PST 2012

Author: ianh
Date: 2012-01-28 10:20:16 -0800 (Sat, 28 Jan 2012)
New Revision: 6927

Modified:
   complete.html
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Clarify example text.
Fixing https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=15176
Affected topics: HTML

Modified: complete.html
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--- complete.html	2012-01-28 02:01:44 UTC (rev 6926)
+++ complete.html	2012-01-28 18:20:16 UTC (rev 6927)
@@ -18027,7 +18027,9 @@
 
   <div class=example>
 
-   <p>These two snippets are equivalent:</p>
+   <p>As far as their respective document outlines (their heading and
+   section structures) are concerned, these two snippets are
+   semantically equivalent:</p>
 
    <pre><body>
 <h1>Let's call it a draw(ing surface)</h1>
@@ -18057,6 +18059,10 @@
  </section>
 </body></pre>
 
+   <p>Authors might prefer the former style for its terseness, or the
+   latter style for its convenience in the face of heavy editing;
+   which is besty is purely an issue of preferred authoring style.</p>
+
   </div>
 
 
@@ -98453,6 +98459,7 @@
   Peter Beverloo,
   Peter Karlsson,
   Peter Kasting,
+  Peter Moulder,
   Peter Stark,
   Peter-Paul Koch,
   Phil Pickering,

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2012-01-28 02:01:44 UTC (rev 6926)
+++ index	2012-01-28 18:20:16 UTC (rev 6927)
@@ -18027,7 +18027,9 @@
 
   <div class=example>
 
-   <p>These two snippets are equivalent:</p>
+   <p>As far as their respective document outlines (their heading and
+   section structures) are concerned, these two snippets are
+   semantically equivalent:</p>
 
    <pre><body>
 <h1>Let's call it a draw(ing surface)</h1>
@@ -18057,6 +18059,10 @@
  </section>
 </body></pre>
 
+   <p>Authors might prefer the former style for its terseness, or the
+   latter style for its convenience in the face of heavy editing;
+   which is besty is purely an issue of preferred authoring style.</p>
+
   </div>
 
 
@@ -98453,6 +98459,7 @@
   Peter Beverloo,
   Peter Karlsson,
   Peter Kasting,
+  Peter Moulder,
   Peter Stark,
   Peter-Paul Koch,
   Phil Pickering,

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2012-01-28 02:01:44 UTC (rev 6926)
+++ source	2012-01-28 18:20:16 UTC (rev 6927)
@@ -19318,7 +19318,9 @@
 
   <div class="example">
 
-   <p>These two snippets are equivalent:</p>
+   <p>As far as their respective document outlines (their heading and
+   section structures) are concerned, these two snippets are
+   semantically equivalent:</p>
 
    <pre><body>
 <h1>Let's call it a draw(ing surface)</h1>
@@ -19348,6 +19350,10 @@
  </section>
 </body></pre>
 
+   <p>Authors might prefer the former style for its terseness, or the
+   latter style for its convenience in the face of heavy editing;
+   which is besty is purely an issue of preferred authoring style.</p>
+
   </div>
 
 
@@ -115334,6 +115340,7 @@
   Peter Beverloo,
   Peter Karlsson,
   Peter Kasting,
+  Peter Moulder,
   Peter Stark,
   Peter-Paul Koch,
   Phil Pickering,


