[html5] r6960 - [e] (0) Try to clarify this mess of a sentence. Fixing https://www.w3.org/Bugs/P [...]

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Author: ianh
Date: 2012-01-31 16:52:50 -0800 (Tue, 31 Jan 2012)
New Revision: 6960

Modified:
   complete.html
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Try to clarify this mess of a sentence.
Fixing https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=15345
Affected topics: Web Workers

Modified: complete.html
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--- complete.html	2012-02-01 00:39:43 UTC (rev 6959)
+++ complete.html	2012-02-01 00:52:50 UTC (rev 6960)
@@ -75469,9 +75469,9 @@
 
   <p>Whenever a <code><a href=#document>Document</a></code> <var title="">d</var> is <dfn id="add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's documents">added to the
   worker's <code>Document</code>s</dfn>, the user agent must, for each
-  worker in the list of <a href="#the-worker's-workers">the worker's workers</a> whose list
-  of <a href="#the-worker's-documents">the worker's <code>Document</code>s</a> does not contain
-  <var title="">d</var>, <a href="#add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's
+  worker <var title="">q</var> in the list of <a href="#the-worker's-workers">the worker's
+  workers</a> whose list of <a href="#the-worker's-documents">the worker's
+  <code>Document</code>s</a> does not contain <var title="">d</var>, <a href="#add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's
   documents">add <var title="">d</var> to <var title="">q</var>'s
   <code>WorkerGlobalScope</code> owner's list of <span>the worker's
   <code>Document</code>s</span></a>.</p> <!-- suggestions welcome

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2012-02-01 00:39:43 UTC (rev 6959)
+++ index	2012-02-01 00:52:50 UTC (rev 6960)
@@ -75469,9 +75469,9 @@
 
   <p>Whenever a <code><a href=#document>Document</a></code> <var title="">d</var> is <dfn id="add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's documents">added to the
   worker's <code>Document</code>s</dfn>, the user agent must, for each
-  worker in the list of <a href="#the-worker's-workers">the worker's workers</a> whose list
-  of <a href="#the-worker's-documents">the worker's <code>Document</code>s</a> does not contain
-  <var title="">d</var>, <a href="#add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's
+  worker <var title="">q</var> in the list of <a href="#the-worker's-workers">the worker's
+  workers</a> whose list of <a href="#the-worker's-documents">the worker's
+  <code>Document</code>s</a> does not contain <var title="">d</var>, <a href="#add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's
   documents">add <var title="">d</var> to <var title="">q</var>'s
   <code>WorkerGlobalScope</code> owner's list of <span>the worker's
   <code>Document</code>s</span></a>.</p> <!-- suggestions welcome

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2012-02-01 00:39:43 UTC (rev 6959)
+++ source	2012-02-01 00:52:50 UTC (rev 6960)
@@ -87486,9 +87486,10 @@
   <p>Whenever a <code>Document</code> <var title="">d</var> is <dfn
   title="add a document to the worker's documents">added to the
   worker's <code>Document</code>s</dfn>, the user agent must, for each
-  worker in the list of <span>the worker's workers</span> whose list
-  of <span>the worker's <code>Document</code>s</span> does not contain
-  <var title="">d</var>, <span title="add a document to the worker's
+  worker <var title="">q</var> in the list of <span>the worker's
+  workers</span> whose list of <span>the worker's
+  <code>Document</code>s</span> does not contain <var
+  title="">d</var>, <span title="add a document to the worker's
   documents">add <var title="">d</var> to <var title="">q</var>'s
   <code>WorkerGlobalScope</code> owner's list of <span>the worker's
   <code>Document</code>s</span></span>.</p> <!-- suggestions welcome