[html5] r7476 - [e] (0) Improve wording. Fixing https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=1 [...]

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Author: ianh
Date: 2012-10-19 14:23:25 -0700 (Fri, 19 Oct 2012)
New Revision: 7476

Modified:
   complete.html
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Improve wording.
Fixing https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=18619
Affected topics: HTML

Modified: complete.html
===================================================================
--- complete.html	2012-10-19 21:21:24 UTC (rev 7475)
+++ complete.html	2012-10-19 21:23:25 UTC (rev 7476)
@@ -1695,29 +1695,24 @@
 
   <p><i>This section is non-normative.</i></p>
 
-  <p>This specification is limited to providing a semantic-level
-  markup language and associated semantic-level scripting APIs for
-  authoring accessible pages on the Web ranging from static documents
-  to dynamic applications.</p>
+  <p>This specification is limited to providing a semantic-level markup language and associated
+  semantic-level scripting APIs for authoring accessible pages on the Web ranging from static
+  documents to dynamic applications.</p>
 
-  <p>The scope of this specification does not include providing
-  mechanisms for media-specific customization of presentation
-  (although default rendering rules for Web browsers are included at
-  the end of this specification, and several mechanisms for hooking
-  into CSS are provided as part of the language).</p>
+  <p>The scope of this specification does not include providing mechanisms for media-specific
+  customization of presentation (although default rendering rules for Web browsers are included at
+  the end of this specification, and several mechanisms for hooking into CSS are provided as part of
+  the language).</p>
 
-  <p>The scope of this specification is not to describe an entire
-  operating system. In particular, hardware configuration software,
-  image manipulation tools, and applications that users would be
-  expected to use with high-end workstations on a daily basis are out
-  of scope. In terms of applications, this specification is targeted
-  specifically at applications that would be expected to be used by
-  users on an occasional basis, or regularly but from disparate
-  locations, with low CPU requirements. For instance online purchasing
-  systems, searching systems, games (especially multiplayer online
-  games), public telephone books or address books, communications
-  software (e-mail clients, instant messaging clients, discussion
-  software), document editing software, etc.</p>
+  <p>The scope of this specification is not to describe an entire operating system. In particular,
+  hardware configuration software, image manipulation tools, and applications that users would be
+  expected to use with high-end workstations on a daily basis are out of scope. In terms of
+  applications, this specification is targeted specifically at applications that would be expected
+  to be used by users on an occasional basis, or regularly but from disparate locations, with low
+  CPU requirements. Examples of such applications include online purchasing systems, searching
+  systems, games (especially multiplayer online games), public telephone books or address books,
+  communications software (e-mail clients, instant messaging clients, discussion software), document
+  editing software, etc.</p>
 
 
   <h3 id=history-1><span class=secno>1.6 </span>History</h3>

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2012-10-19 21:21:24 UTC (rev 7475)
+++ index	2012-10-19 21:23:25 UTC (rev 7476)
@@ -1695,29 +1695,24 @@
 
   <p><i>This section is non-normative.</i></p>
 
-  <p>This specification is limited to providing a semantic-level
-  markup language and associated semantic-level scripting APIs for
-  authoring accessible pages on the Web ranging from static documents
-  to dynamic applications.</p>
+  <p>This specification is limited to providing a semantic-level markup language and associated
+  semantic-level scripting APIs for authoring accessible pages on the Web ranging from static
+  documents to dynamic applications.</p>
 
-  <p>The scope of this specification does not include providing
-  mechanisms for media-specific customization of presentation
-  (although default rendering rules for Web browsers are included at
-  the end of this specification, and several mechanisms for hooking
-  into CSS are provided as part of the language).</p>
+  <p>The scope of this specification does not include providing mechanisms for media-specific
+  customization of presentation (although default rendering rules for Web browsers are included at
+  the end of this specification, and several mechanisms for hooking into CSS are provided as part of
+  the language).</p>
 
-  <p>The scope of this specification is not to describe an entire
-  operating system. In particular, hardware configuration software,
-  image manipulation tools, and applications that users would be
-  expected to use with high-end workstations on a daily basis are out
-  of scope. In terms of applications, this specification is targeted
-  specifically at applications that would be expected to be used by
-  users on an occasional basis, or regularly but from disparate
-  locations, with low CPU requirements. For instance online purchasing
-  systems, searching systems, games (especially multiplayer online
-  games), public telephone books or address books, communications
-  software (e-mail clients, instant messaging clients, discussion
-  software), document editing software, etc.</p>
+  <p>The scope of this specification is not to describe an entire operating system. In particular,
+  hardware configuration software, image manipulation tools, and applications that users would be
+  expected to use with high-end workstations on a daily basis are out of scope. In terms of
+  applications, this specification is targeted specifically at applications that would be expected
+  to be used by users on an occasional basis, or regularly but from disparate locations, with low
+  CPU requirements. Examples of such applications include online purchasing systems, searching
+  systems, games (especially multiplayer online games), public telephone books or address books,
+  communications software (e-mail clients, instant messaging clients, discussion software), document
+  editing software, etc.</p>
 
 
   <h3 id=history-1><span class=secno>1.6 </span>History</h3>

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2012-10-19 21:21:24 UTC (rev 7475)
+++ source	2012-10-19 21:23:25 UTC (rev 7476)
@@ -428,29 +428,24 @@
 
   <!--END dev-html--><p><i>This section is non-normative.</i></p><!--START dev-html-->
 
-  <p>This specification is limited to providing a semantic-level
-  markup language and associated semantic-level scripting APIs for
-  authoring accessible pages on the Web ranging from static documents
-  to dynamic applications.</p>
+  <p>This specification is limited to providing a semantic-level markup language and associated
+  semantic-level scripting APIs for authoring accessible pages on the Web ranging from static
+  documents to dynamic applications.</p>
 
-  <p>The scope of this specification does not include providing
-  mechanisms for media-specific customization of presentation
-  (although default rendering rules for Web browsers are included at
-  the end of this specification, and several mechanisms for hooking
-  into CSS are provided as part of the language).</p>
+  <p>The scope of this specification does not include providing mechanisms for media-specific
+  customization of presentation (although default rendering rules for Web browsers are included at
+  the end of this specification, and several mechanisms for hooking into CSS are provided as part of
+  the language).</p>
 
-  <p>The scope of this specification is not to describe an entire
-  operating system. In particular, hardware configuration software,
-  image manipulation tools, and applications that users would be
-  expected to use with high-end workstations on a daily basis are out
-  of scope. In terms of applications, this specification is targeted
-  specifically at applications that would be expected to be used by
-  users on an occasional basis, or regularly but from disparate
-  locations, with low CPU requirements. For instance online purchasing
-  systems, searching systems, games (especially multiplayer online
-  games), public telephone books or address books, communications
-  software (e-mail clients, instant messaging clients, discussion
-  software), document editing software, etc.</p>
+  <p>The scope of this specification is not to describe an entire operating system. In particular,
+  hardware configuration software, image manipulation tools, and applications that users would be
+  expected to use with high-end workstations on a daily basis are out of scope. In terms of
+  applications, this specification is targeted specifically at applications that would be expected
+  to be used by users on an occasional basis, or regularly but from disparate locations, with low
+  CPU requirements. Examples of such applications include online purchasing systems, searching
+  systems, games (especially multiplayer online games), public telephone books or address books,
+  communications software (e-mail clients, instant messaging clients, discussion software), document
+  editing software, etc.</p>
 
 
   <h3>History</h3>