[html5] r8053 - [e] (0) Try to provide a more concrete example to make this easier to follow. Af [...]

Fri Jul 12 12:53:57 PDT 2013

Author: ianh
Date: 2013-07-12 12:53:56 -0700 (Fri, 12 Jul 2013)
New Revision: 8053

Modified:
   complete.html
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Try to provide a more concrete example to make this easier to follow.
Affected topics: HTML

Modified: complete.html
===================================================================

--- complete.html	2013-07-12 19:27:01 UTC (rev 8052)
+++ complete.html	2013-07-12 19:53:56 UTC (rev 8053)
@@ -9112,7 +9112,22 @@
   <div class=example>
 
    <p>As a simple example, consider a Web page written by an author who only considered desktop
-   computer Web browsers. Because HTML conveys <em>meaning</em>, rather than presentation, the same
+   computer Web browsers:</p>
+
+   <pre><!DOCTYPE HTML>
+<html>
+ <head>
+  <title>My Page</title>
+ </head>
+ <body>
+  <h1>Welcome to my page</h1>
+  <p>I like cars and lorries and have a big Jeep!</p>
+  <h2>Where I live</h2>
+  <p>I live in a small hut on a mountain!</p>
+ </body>
+</html></pre>
+
+   <p>Because HTML conveys <em>meaning</em>, rather than presentation, the same
    page can also be used by a small browser on a mobile phone, without any change to the page.
    Instead of headings being in large letters as on the desktop, for example, the browser on the
    mobile phone might use the same size text for the whole the page, but with the headings in
@@ -103857,6 +103872,7 @@
   Dean Edwards,
   Debi Orton,
   Derek Featherstone,
+  Devarshi Pant,
   Devdatta,
   Dimitri Glazkov,
   Dimitry Golubovsky,

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2013-07-12 19:27:01 UTC (rev 8052)
+++ index	2013-07-12 19:53:56 UTC (rev 8053)
@@ -9112,7 +9112,22 @@
   <div class=example>
 
    <p>As a simple example, consider a Web page written by an author who only considered desktop
-   computer Web browsers. Because HTML conveys <em>meaning</em>, rather than presentation, the same
+   computer Web browsers:</p>
+
+   <pre><!DOCTYPE HTML>
+<html>
+ <head>
+  <title>My Page</title>
+ </head>
+ <body>
+  <h1>Welcome to my page</h1>
+  <p>I like cars and lorries and have a big Jeep!</p>
+  <h2>Where I live</h2>
+  <p>I live in a small hut on a mountain!</p>
+ </body>
+</html></pre>
+
+   <p>Because HTML conveys <em>meaning</em>, rather than presentation, the same
    page can also be used by a small browser on a mobile phone, without any change to the page.
    Instead of headings being in large letters as on the desktop, for example, the browser on the
    mobile phone might use the same size text for the whole the page, but with the headings in
@@ -103857,6 +103872,7 @@
   Dean Edwards,
   Debi Orton,
   Derek Featherstone,
+  Devarshi Pant,
   Devdatta,
   Dimitri Glazkov,
   Dimitry Golubovsky,

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2013-07-12 19:27:01 UTC (rev 8052)
+++ source	2013-07-12 19:53:56 UTC (rev 8053)
@@ -8948,7 +8948,22 @@
   <div class="example">
 
    <p>As a simple example, consider a Web page written by an author who only considered desktop
-   computer Web browsers. Because HTML conveys <em>meaning</em>, rather than presentation, the same
+   computer Web browsers:</p>
+
+   <pre><!DOCTYPE HTML>
+<html>
+ <head>
+  <title>My Page</title>
+ </head>
+ <body>
+  <h1>Welcome to my page</h1>
+  <p>I like cars and lorries and have a big Jeep!</p>
+  <h2>Where I live</h2>
+  <p>I live in a small hut on a mountain!</p>
+ </body>
+</html></pre>
+
+   <p>Because HTML conveys <em>meaning</em>, rather than presentation, the same
    page can also be used by a small browser on a mobile phone, without any change to the page.
    Instead of headings being in large letters as on the desktop, for example, the browser on the
    mobile phone might use the same size text for the whole the page, but with the headings in
@@ -116459,6 +116474,7 @@
   Dean Edwards,
   Debi Orton,
   Derek Featherstone,
+  Devarshi Pant,
   Devdatta,
   Dimitri Glazkov,
   Dimitry Golubovsky,


