[whatwg] [html5] r4627 - [e] (0) some editorial improvements to 'the indicated part...'

[Simon Pieters]

On Wed, 27 Jan 2010 02:49:15 +0100, <whatwg at whatwg.org> wrote:

> Author: ianh
> Date: 2010-01-26 17:49:13 -0800 (Tue, 26 Jan 2010)
> New Revision: 4627
>
> Modified:
>    complete.html
>    index
>    source
> Log:
> [e] (0) some editorial improvements to 'the indicated part...'


> Modified: source
> ===================================================================
> --- source	2010-01-24 11:34:30 UTC (rev 4626)
> +++ source	2010-01-27 01:49:13 UTC (rev 4627)
> @@ -64669,7 +64669,8 @@
>    defined by the specification that defines the <span>MIME type</span>
>    used by the <code>Document</code> (for example, the processing of
>    fragment identifiers for <span title="XML MIME type">XML MIME
> -  types</span> is the responsibility of RFC3023).</p>
> +  types</span> is the responsibility of RFC3023). <a
> +  href="#refsRFC3023">[RFC3023]</a></p>
>   <p>For HTML documents (and <span title="HTML MIME type">HTML MIME
>    types</span>), the following processing model must be followed to
> @@ -64684,8 +64685,9 @@
>     URL.</p></li><!-- parsing can't fail, since we checked earlier on
>     when navigating -->
> -   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then the
> -   indicated part of the document is the top of the document.</p></li>
> +   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then
> +   <span>the indicated part of the document</span> is the top of the
> +   document.</p></li>
>    <li><p>Let <var title="">decoded fragid</var> be the result of
>     expanding any sequences of percent-encoded octets in <var
> @@ -64707,8 +64709,8 @@
>     order is <span>the indicated part of the document</span>; stop the
>     algorithm here.</p></li>

Here it should say somehting like "if fragid is "top" ascii case  
insensitively then the indicated part of the document is the top of the  
document".


> -   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no indicated part of the
> -   document.</p></li>
> +   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no <span title="the indicated part of
> +   the document">indicated part of the document</span>.</p></li>
>   </ol>
>
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Simon Pieters
Opera Software