[html5] r3157 - [e] (0) Tweak some informative wording for clarity. (bug 6767)

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Author: ianh
Date: 2009-06-01 01:54:15 -0700 (Mon, 01 Jun 2009)
New Revision: 3157

Modified:
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Tweak some informative wording for clarity. (bug 6767)

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2009-06-01 07:58:32 UTC (rev 3156)
+++ index	2009-06-01 08:54:15 UTC (rev 3157)
@@ -15393,10 +15393,10 @@
    <p>For dates before the introduction of the Gregorian calendar,
    authors are encouraged to not use the <code><a href=#the-time-element>time</a></code> element, or
    else to be very careful about converting dates and times from the
-   period to the Gregorian calendar. This is complicated by the way
-   the Gregorian calendar was phased in at different times in
-   different countries, ranging from part way through the 16th century
-   all the way to early in the 20th.</p>
+   period to the Gregorian calendar. This is complicated by the manner
+   in which the Gregorian calendar was phased in, which occurred at
+   different times in different countries, ranging from partway
+   through the 16th century all the way to early in the 20th.</p>
 
   </div>
 
@@ -70706,6 +70706,7 @@
   Benjamin Hawkes-Lewis,
   Bert Bos,
   Bijan Parsia,
+  Bil Corry,
   Bill Mason,
   Bill McCoy,
   Billy Wong,

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2009-06-01 07:58:32 UTC (rev 3156)
+++ source	2009-06-01 08:54:15 UTC (rev 3157)
@@ -16451,10 +16451,10 @@
    <p>For dates before the introduction of the Gregorian calendar,
    authors are encouraged to not use the <code>time</code> element, or
    else to be very careful about converting dates and times from the
-   period to the Gregorian calendar. This is complicated by the way
-   the Gregorian calendar was phased in at different times in
-   different countries, ranging from part way through the 16th century
-   all the way to early in the 20th.</p>
+   period to the Gregorian calendar. This is complicated by the manner
+   in which the Gregorian calendar was phased in, which occurred at
+   different times in different countries, ranging from partway
+   through the 16th century all the way to early in the 20th.</p>
 
   </div>
 
@@ -83367,6 +83367,7 @@
   Benjamin Hawkes-Lewis,
   Bert Bos,
   Bijan Parsia,
+  Bil Corry,
   Bill Mason,
   Bill McCoy,
   Billy Wong,