[html5] r1129 - /

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Author: ianh
Date: 2007-11-05 15:30:14 -0800 (Mon, 05 Nov 2007)
New Revision: 1129

Modified:
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Various typos and redundancies about recent link type edits

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2007-11-05 22:42:32 UTC (rev 1128)
+++ index	2007-11-05 23:30:14 UTC (rev 1129)
@@ -32056,10 +32056,9 @@
   <p>Some documents form part of a hierarchical structure of documents.
 
   <p>A hierarchical structure of documents is one where each document can
-   have various subdocuments. A subdocument is said to be a <em>child</em> of
-   the document it is a subdocument of. The document of which it is a
-   subdocument is said to be its <em>parent</em>. A document with no parent
-   forms the top of the hierarchy.
+   have various subdocuments. The document of which a document is a
+   subdocument is said to be the document's <em>parent</em>. A document with
+   no parent forms the top of the hierarchy.
 
   <p>A document may be part of multiple hierarchies.
 
@@ -32149,8 +32148,8 @@
 
   <p>A sequence of documents is one where each document can have a
    <em>previous sibling</em> and a <em>next sibling</em>. A document with no
-   previous sibling is the start of the sequence, a document with no next
-   sibling is the end of the a sequence.
+   previous sibling is the start of its sequence, a document with no next
+   sibling is the end of its sequence.
 
   <p>A document may be part of multiple sequences.
 

Modified: source
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--- source	2007-11-05 22:42:32 UTC (rev 1128)
+++ source	2007-11-05 23:30:14 UTC (rev 1129)
@@ -29523,10 +29523,9 @@
   documents.</p>
 
   <p>A hierarchical structure of documents is one where each document
-  can have various subdocuments. A subdocument is said to be a
-  <em>child</em> of the document it is a subdocument of. The document
-  of which it is a subdocument is said to be its <em>parent</em>. A
-  document with no parent forms the top of the hierarchy.</p>
+  can have various subdocuments. The document of which a document is a
+  subdocument is said to be the document's <em>parent</em>. A document
+  with no parent forms the top of the hierarchy.</p>
 
   <p>A document may be part of multiple hierarchies.</p>
 
@@ -29615,8 +29614,8 @@
 
   <p>A sequence of documents is one where each document can have a
   <em>previous sibling</em> and a <em>next sibling</em>. A document
-  with no previous sibling is the start of the sequence, a document
-  with no next sibling is the end of the a sequence.</p>
+  with no previous sibling is the start of its sequence, a document
+  with no next sibling is the end of its sequence.</p>
 
   <p>A document may be part of multiple sequences.</p>