[html5] r1295 - /

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Author: ianh
Date: 2008-03-02 02:14:44 -0800 (Sun, 02 Mar 2008)
New Revision: 1295

Modified:
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) Reduce redundancy in the writing section (editorial)

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2008-03-02 10:06:15 UTC (rev 1294)
+++ index	2008-03-02 10:14:44 UTC (rev 1295)
@@ -37229,10 +37229,6 @@
    declarations</span> are to be serialised, as discussed in the section on
    that topic.
 
-  <p>The U+0000 NULL character, control characters other than the <a
-   href="#space" title="space character">space characters</a>, and characters
-   that are not defined by Unicode, must not appear anywhere in a document.
-
   <p class=note>Space characters before the root <code><a
    href="#html">html</a></code> element will be dropped when the document is
    parsed; space characters <em>after</em> the root <code><a
@@ -37462,11 +37458,12 @@
    title=syntax-attribute-name>Attribute names</dfn> must consist of one or
    more characters other than the <a href="#space" title="space
    character">space characters</a>, U+003E GREATER-THAN SIGN (>), U+002F
-   SOLIDUS (/), and U+003D EQUALS SIGN (=). In the HTML syntax, attribute
-   names may be written with any mix of lower- and uppercase letters that,
-   when converted to all-lowercase<!-- ASCII
-  case-insensitive -->, matches
-   the attribute's name; attribute names are case-insensitive.
+   SOLIDUS (/), U+003D EQUALS SIGN (=), the U+0000 NULL character, the
+   control characters, and any characters that are not defined by Unicode. In
+   the HTML syntax, attribute names may be written with any mix of lower- and
+   uppercase letters that, when converted to
+   all-lowercase<!-- ASCII case-insensitive -->, matches the attribute's
+   name; attribute names are case-insensitive.
 
   <p><dfn id=attribute0 title=syntax-attribute-value>Attribute values</dfn>
    are a mixture of <a href="#text1" title=syntax-text>text</a> and <a
@@ -37827,11 +37824,12 @@
   <h4 id=text><span class=secno>8.1.3 </span>Text</h4>
 
   <p><dfn id=text1 title=syntax-text>Text</dfn> is allowed inside elements,
-   attributes, and comments. Text must consist of valid Unicode characters
-   other than U+0000. Text should not contain control characters other than
-   <a href="#space" title="space character">space characters</a>. Extra
-   constraints are placed on what is and what is not allowed in text based on
-   where the text is to be put, as described in the other sections.
+   attributes, and comments. Text must consist of valid Unicode characters.
+   Text must not contain U+0000 characters. Text must not contain control
+   characters other than <a href="#space" title="space character">space
+   characters</a>. Extra constraints are placed on what is and what is not
+   allowed in text based on where the text is to be put, as described in the
+   other sections.
 
   <h5 id=newlines><span class=secno>8.1.3.1. </span>Newlines</h5>
 

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2008-03-02 10:06:15 UTC (rev 1294)
+++ source	2008-03-02 10:14:44 UTC (rev 1295)
@@ -34747,11 +34747,6 @@
   encoding declarations</span> are to be serialised, as discussed in
   the section on that topic.</p>
 
-  <p>The U+0000 NULL character, control characters other than the
-  <span title="space character">space characters</span>, and
-  characters that are not defined by Unicode, must not appear anywhere
-  in a document.</p>
-
   <p class="note">Space characters before the root <code>html</code>
   element will be dropped when the document is parsed; space
   characters <em>after</em> the root <code>html</code> element will be
@@ -34963,11 +34958,12 @@
   title="syntax-attribute-name">Attribute names</dfn> must consist of
   one or more characters other than the <span title="space
   character">space characters</span>, U+003E GREATER-THAN SIGN (>),
-  U+002F SOLIDUS (/), and U+003D EQUALS SIGN (=). In the HTML syntax,
-  attribute names may be written with any mix of lower- and uppercase
-  letters that, when converted to all-lowercase<!-- ASCII
-  case-insensitive -->, matches the attribute's name; attribute names
-  are case-insensitive.</p>
+  U+002F SOLIDUS (/), U+003D EQUALS SIGN (=), the U+0000 NULL
+  character, the control characters, and any characters that are not
+  defined by Unicode. In the HTML syntax, attribute names may be
+  written with any mix of lower- and uppercase letters that, when
+  converted to all-lowercase<!-- ASCII case-insensitive -->, matches
+  the attribute's name; attribute names are case-insensitive.</p>
 
   <p><dfn title="syntax-attribute-value">Attribute values</dfn> are a
   mixture of <span title="syntax-text">text</span> and <span
@@ -35334,11 +35330,11 @@
 
   <p><dfn title="syntax-text">Text</dfn> is allowed inside elements,
   attributes, and comments. Text must consist of valid Unicode
-  characters other than U+0000. Text should not contain control
-  characters other than <span title="space character">space
-  characters</span>. Extra constraints are placed on what is and what
-  is not allowed in text based on where the text is to be put, as
-  described in the other sections.</p>
+  characters. Text must not contain U+0000 characters. Text must not
+  contain control characters other than <span title="space
+  character">space characters</span>. Extra constraints are placed on
+  what is and what is not allowed in text based on where the text is
+  to be put, as described in the other sections.</p>
 
 
   <h5>Newlines</h5>
@@ -35349,7 +35345,6 @@
   U+000A LINE FEED (LF) characters in that order.</p>
 
 
-
   <h4>Character entity references</h4>
 
   <p>In certain cases described in other sections, <span