[html5] r1564 - /

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Author: ianh
Date: 2008-05-08 02:53:38 -0700 (Thu, 08 May 2008)
New Revision: 1564

Modified:
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) make it read better

Modified: index
===================================================================
--- index	2008-05-08 09:43:17 UTC (rev 1563)
+++ index	2008-05-08 09:53:38 UTC (rev 1564)
@@ -4862,9 +4862,9 @@
 
    <li>
     <p>If there is a character in the string <var title="">input</var> at
-     position <var title="">position</var>, and it is either a U+0020 SPACE
-     character, a U+002C COMMA character, or a U+003B SEMICOLON character,
-     then advance <var title="">position</var> to the next character in <var
+     position <var title="">position</var>, and it is either a U+0020 SPACE,
+     U+002C COMMA, or U+003B SEMICOLON character, then advance <var
+     title="">position</var> to the next character in <var
      title="">input</var>, or to beyond the end of the string if there are no
      more characters.
 
@@ -4874,8 +4874,8 @@
 
    <li>
     <p>If the character in the string <var title="">input</var> at position
-     <var title="">position</var> is a U+0020 SPACE character, a U+002C COMMA
-     character, or a U+003B SEMICOLON character, then return to step 4.
+     <var title="">position</var> is a U+0020 SPACE, U+002C COMMA, or U+003B
+     SEMICOLON character, then return to step 4.
 
    <li>
     <p>Let <var title="">negated</var> be false.

Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source	2008-05-08 09:43:17 UTC (rev 1563)
+++ source	2008-05-08 09:53:38 UTC (rev 1564)
@@ -3337,20 +3337,18 @@
 
    <li><p>If there is a character in the string <var
    title="">input</var> at position <var title="">position</var>, and
-   it is either a U+0020 SPACE character, a U+002C COMMA character, or
-   a U+003B SEMICOLON character, then advance <var
-   title="">position</var> to the next character in <var
-   title="">input</var>, or to beyond the end of the string if there
-   are no more characters.</p></li>
+   it is either a U+0020 SPACE, U+002C COMMA, or U+003B SEMICOLON
+   character, then advance <var title="">position</var> to the next
+   character in <var title="">input</var>, or to beyond the end of the
+   string if there are no more characters.</p></li>
 
    <li><p>If <var title="">position</var> points to beyond the end of
    <var title="">input</var>, return <var title="">numbers</var> and
    abort.</p></li>
 
    <li><p>If the character in the string <var title="">input</var> at
-   position <var title="">position</var> is a U+0020 SPACE character,
-   a U+002C COMMA character, or a U+003B SEMICOLON character, then
-   return to step 4.</li>
+   position <var title="">position</var> is a U+0020 SPACE, U+002C
+   COMMA, or U+003B SEMICOLON character, then return to step 4.</li>
 
    <li><p>Let <var title="">negated</var> be false.</p></li>
    <li><p>Let <var title="">value</var> be 0.</p></li>