[whatwg] WA1: Conformance requirements
Aankhen
aankhen at gmail.com
Fri Mar 10 22:02:10 PST 2006
On 3/11/06, Ian Hickson <ian at hixie.ch> wrote:
> [snip]
> I've reworded the paragraph like this:
>
> <p>Some conformance requirements are phrased as requirements on
> elements, attributes, methods or objects. Such requirements fall
> into two categories; those describing content model restrictions,
> and those describing implementatino behaviour.
Minor change: that should probably be a full colon there rather than a
semi-colon.
> The former category
> of requirements are requirements on documents and authoring
> tools. The second category are requirements on user agents.</p>
Is there a need to say "of requirements" after "category"? It seems
unnecessary. Perhaps this might do:
"The former category describes requirements on documents and
authoring tools. The second describes requirements on user
agents."
Aankhen
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